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  The Forbidden Tower.

                              By Ele

               Introduction. 

pg1 There were five kids in a school whose names were Amanda, Carley, Azzy, Aimee, and Me. They never wanted to go to school not because the questions were hard it was because the teachers were zombies…

pg2 Once upon a time there were four kids who were going for a walk. It was so cold but in the end they got lost. At first they were worried but they walked on. It was a looooong walk. They saw a house. They were happy when they were closer

pg3 Azzy said, ‘’that's not a home that's the Forbidden tower’’. No-one

 said anything. I was not afraid,  As we got near we saw warning signs we looked at the other side and there was a Forest, that made us even more scared  there were boarded up windows but when we opened the door it creaked and then sparrows came flying out of the place where they were hiding. When we got into the tower there was mold and old rotten pg4 wood as we walk on there were skulls and then Carley said’’ I’ve got the creeps’’

‘’but I said ‘’let's carry on’’ later on we saw a cat Carley went up to touch it and I said’’ don't touch  anything ok’’ everyone nodded. We went on and then they heard videos and it said ‘’come play with me please’’ I looked up there was no one there so we went on and then turned if there was a kitchen. Then they saw a maid and a  witch with two twins the  maid said’’ would you like some food?’’ they all said no thank we already got some and then the pg5 witch went away and the twins said ‘’come play with me please’’ and we were like ‘’yeah sure’’ they showed us secret passages out of the tower and in the tower lead us  into a beautiful garden then the twins said ‘’do you want to see our maid's?’’ I said ‘’no sorry’’ we ran for our lives. The twins went back into the forbidden Tower. We went into the forbidden tower and then we went down a Passage that the twins showed us then we ran we pg6 went back to where we came from and then we saw a shadow it's was the witch, When she was now Amanda which would touch her and she would turn bed the twins came back so I said Amanda are you ok she said come play with me please so I said run!!!! we all ran and then Amanda touched me in then I went there must be another way out I touched Azzy and we said sorry and touched Carley and then we all said come play with me and Then Aimee pg6 said ‘’who's there’’ then ‘’I said come and play with me please’’ Aimee said Azzy Ele carley amanda Azzy said are you hungry and and then the witch went away and the twins said ‘’come play with me please’’ and we were like ‘’yeah sure’’ they showed us secret passages out of the tower and in the tower lead us  into a beautiful garden then the twins said ‘’do you want to see our maid's?’’ I said ‘’no sorry’’ we ran for our lives. The twins went back into the forbidden Tower. We went into the forbidden tower and then we went down a Passage that the twins showed us then we ran we went back to where we came from and pg7 then we saw a shadow it's was the witch, When she was now Amanda which would touch her and she would turn bed the twins came back so I said Amanda are you ok she said come play with me please so I said run!!!! we all ran and then Amanda touched me in then I went there must be another way out I touched Azzy and we said sorry and touched Carley and then we all said come play with me and Then Aimee said ‘’who's there’’ then ‘’I said come and play with me please’’ Aimee said Azzy Ele carley amanda Azzy said are you hungry and pg8 she said yes and they lived happily ever after.